Mikes Monday Crit

I sat down with Mike and showed him the animatic that me and Sam had made.

• Improved from the last one 
• reads more clearly
• the shots make sense
• more funny
• Tex avery style working
• nothing needs to be dramatically changed.

Improvements

• smoke more flowing.
• just a slight alteration in the way that the marmot enters.
• collect sheets of Mike it will make more sense.
• Tex avery style across the mountain speed it up.
• like wise when the man follows.
• delete zig zag shot
• sliding could through in some tree perspective shots.
• or when they run over the cliff part could make it more dramatic
• when they fly of the cliff just change it slightly. refer to drawing sheets.
• some close up of marmot face.
• when Marmot enters he could tap the man on the shoulder.
• cliff scene could track them then reveal the mountain.
• when climbing one OTS shot marmot looking scared. 
• last scene re do e.g. when man is about to eat eagle swoops in and bam ending.