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The Pitch we had all worked extremely hard and had made a good start to our film, We had some animation tests some render tests and the story line was fine. However the film was in its very early stages and we needed to improve and develop the entire film. The tutors feedback was as followed, We all need to slow down, take our time and get the film right e.g. the character concepts and design could have been improved.
We listened and took all the comments on board and decided to rethink the design of the film.